Prometheous

I was sitting on cold grass bored. So i decided to make some mud people.Promethous carefully made people with his bare hands. Finally he finished. The mud shaped people were standing there. He sat there for quite a while before he had a big idea. So he went to visit zeus.He went up to zeus and asked him a favour.” Can u bring these people to life” Zeus owed him because prometheuos saved his life in a battle a while a go. “Yes what is it” he replied.” Can u bring these people to life” he said ” is that it. Then ok” Then he magically brought all of the mud statues to life. They started walking around working their way around the mud patch. Then the people started shivering. They were cold. So prometheous went yp to zeus again and asked him for another favour. Zeus said no and prometheous got angry at zeus. So zeus hid the fire away from prometheous and put guards in to protect it. Prometheous wanted the fire for the people desperatly so he found away. First he killed the guards then he went into the maze and found the fire at end of it. Then he took it and gave it to the people.

1 Comment

  1. Harry,

    This is a good start.

    Where should your commas go, I noticed that you haven’t used any throuhgout this work?

    Where should your paragraphs be – how would you divide the work here and why?

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